tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8917854544105784008.post1885535069531884267..comments2009-12-06T19:01:16.788-08:00Comments on "Something tells me the truth is just out of focus.": Picture Perfect?Carley Laaksohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08919273254791202461noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8917854544105784008.post-5766584494985243742009-12-06T19:01:16.788-08:002009-12-06T19:01:16.788-08:00Your description of the christmas tree was very we...Your description of the christmas tree was very well done. I could picture it exactly in my mind. I liked how you connected the pine scent at the beginning to the pine scent at the end, even if the meaning is completely changed. At the beginning, I had no clue that the tree was artificial because you describe it so vividly. I'm not sure if you need both of the last two lines because I think it have more emphasis and a better final effect if you were to have chosen one or the other. Otherwise, this post really got me into the Christmas mood. Well done!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com